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I admire your attempt at establishing objective criteria to judge which are the most and least "regular" of the sonnets, though I suspect there will always be a fair amount of subjectivity in practice. For instance, sonnet 107 feels more radically varied to my ear than sonnet 86, most likely because it contains more beat shifts - including the less common patterns containing beat shifts, or in less common positions.

The opening swing (or trochee-iamb combi, if we were to insist on dividing it into individual feet) is so common that it feels a less notable departure than a swing elsewhere in the line, or another variant pattern containing a beat shift. And, indeed, a swing elsewhere in the line *does* produce a more dramatic switch up in the rhythm.

I wholly disagree there is anything innately faulty in rhyming words that close on a light beat! Or even rhyming such a word with another that closes on a heavy beat! Most recently I memorised "Sonnets from the Portuguese", and Elizabeth Barrett Browning does it often enough: I really don't think it will do to say that she too is a "hack rhymer"!

I am also *very* much in the camp that you can have a fully stressed offbeat within an iambic template. As you mentioned sonnet 86, would you also consider this line to have six beats?

"No, neither he, nor his compeers by night,"

It seems impossible to me pronounce "NO," at a lower stress than the beat on "NEIther". Unless you're reading that word as two light syllables, producing a swing? But even then, there are countless similar examples.

I recently wrote a long and very thorough post on variation within iambic pentameter (and more to come!), so that might interest you.

"For Brutus is an honourable man," is an example of what I call a "golden line": the default enlarged 3-beat rhythm of the pentameter is brought into sharp relief when the even-numbered beats are light.

I also specifically discuss the line "Sweets with sweets war not, joy delights in joy" in a note!

I am only too aware that no two metrists agree on everything, but my own suggestion is that you keep an open mind even if I say something you don't initially agree with: there's a lot of material here, and it all interlocks, so it may be worthwhile reserving your own opinion until you've covered all of it. Anyway, I hope it's of some interest, at least!: https://poemshape.substack.com/p/the-multifaceted-pentameter-part?utm_campaign=post-expanded-share&utm_medium=web

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